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It was just a normal Saturday at the ranch. Almost all of Jenna's Pokémon were out of thier Pokéballs. Ross was with Saria at a table handing out plates of cookies, Mathew and Elisabeth were watching Scratch and Sibelius, Cotton was surfing on Napoleon's back, and Veruka was leaning on the big oak tree on the hill. Veruka was watching the ocean as she heard Vincent running up the hill holding a small plate with some cookies and a Pokécola.

("Time for our date,") said Vincent, handing her a cookie as he sat down next to Veruka with a big goofy smile on his face.

Veruka sighed with a grin, ("Is it Saturday already?") The first Saturday of every month, Rupert would get the newest issue of Pokéchik magazine and read it all day. Coincidently, Jenna just so happens to makes plates of cookies for all her Pokémon on Saturdays so Vincent uses this time to hang out with Veruka. ("Do you have to call it a date?")

("What else would you call it?" )

("My day off!")

("I see it as our day together, alone.")

Veruka then slapped him in the back of the head. ("I'm only alone with you because Rupert is off somewhere.")

("All that matters is that we have a day together.") He said as he picked up his can of Pokécola.

("Just be grateful that Leopold is watching everyone on the ranch for me today.")

("I'll thank him later.") He said as he opened the Pokécola, which from the run up the hill, was shook up and squirted all over him.

Veruka just sat there and laughed as her friend blushed in embarrassment.

Vincent sighed ("How am I going to get this cleaned off?")

( "You can use the hose behind the house.") she said as she stood up and picking up the cookies. ("I'm going over by Ross and Saria.")

("Ok,") said Vincent as he ran over to the hose, behind the house, and out of sight.
This is a story I came up with in my spare time. Hope you like it. :D

page review by ~superbunnytothemax
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thank you all the people in the RD chatroom, I could have never written this without you all :)
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Axel230 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Short but sweet and funny
Your little details make it all really clear
Me like it!
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Herodrake Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
Can't wait for the next one
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inhuman2000 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Student Writer
I am the Batman!!!! ... ... Oh, wrong story...
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RusBus94 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
lol, Vincent as batman would be the funniest thing ever.
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inhuman2000 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Student Writer
Totally!
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SnowHawk7 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Nice start, I'm interested to see where this goes.
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TamarinFrog Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Ah, short and sweet start. I wonder how this will continue?
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RusBus94 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
Glad you liked it.
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EyeFox Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Student Writer
I like it :D
FUNNY!!!!
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Ellyntaal Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
Lol seems funny so far. I wonder what's gonna happen next?
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